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  • Mood: Agony
  • Listening to: the songs a good close friend of mine showed me
  • Reading: nothing
  • Watching: nothing
  • Playing: nothing
  • Eating: rather starve but considering eating a sandwich
  • Drinking: water

Idiocy

My insanity, the words which represents a different meaning. The words which leave my lips paling to the words which echoes in my mind. The words that others hear making a mockery of my own name and choices. The ideas which curse my very being. The voice which speaks my words. Slurred and idiotic. The ideas which do not fully represent the plot of the tales I speak echoing the past. The simplistic memory which so easily forgets the details to give proof to the tales. The curse of idiocy. One of which I do not prefer to have. The curse to be an idiot with little to no self-control. My own ideas that of another person but yet not spoken no matter how badly I wish to spout them. The will not there to release the echoes within my head.

Eternal damnation

My idiotic voice.

 

Behaviour

My behaviour unfitting of my thoughts. The actions which I take reveal a different appearance but not the image which I wish I could convey. The actions I take of a fool so desperate for friend and company, that of a subject of anyone who will allow me to serve. That of a joker dancing for their king. What was the point of these behaviours? I have made friends but yet I still feel a depth of hallow emotions. Being a human which I wish not to be. A human even I find annoying and dislike. The eyes of a demon and yet the form of an idiot. The actions of a jester working for the court. The voice of that of a verbally impaired person. The pronunciation of an orger. What is the point to smile or laugh when you cannot control whether you laugh or smile. The emotions which cannot be reasoned with or held to a resolve. My recent behaviour of a child looking for attention which will allude to nothing more than hatred of the piers and company.

Eternal damnation

Act like an idiot and be treated like a fool and only feeling resent towards your own form.


yes i wrote this and they hold my own meaning. if you choose to read this let it be known and i did not force you to and you can do as you please with it. i only choose to look at this as my own resentment towards myself.

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:iconflossandchaos:
FlossAndChaos Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks for the watch! Did you ever eat that sandwich you were considering?
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forsakenimmortal Featured By Owner 1 day ago
do not remember to be honest
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FlossAndChaos Featured By Owner 6 hours ago  Hobbyist Artist
Heh, ok XP
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epicminion Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
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Send This To All Your Friends, And Me If I Am 1.
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forsakenimmortal Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014
You've been hugged !!~ Tight Hug

Share the DeviantART love and exercise your hugging muscles!~ (You can copy and paste this on user pages!~)

RULES:
1- You can hug the person who hugged you!
2- You MUST hug 6 other people, at least!
3- You should hug them in public! Paste it on their page!
4- Random hugs are perfectly okay! (And sweet~)
5- You should most definitely get started hugging right away!

Send This To All Your Friends, And Me If I Am 1.
If You Get 7 Back You Are Loved!

1-3 You're bad friend
4-6 You're an okay friend
7-9 You're a good friend
10-& Up You're a great friend
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epicminion Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014
awww, thanks!
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Aleiino Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks for the fave!
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epicminion Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013
thank for the fav!!! :D
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forsakenimmortal Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013
no problem you earned it
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