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  • Mood: Agony
  • Listening to: the songs a good close friend of mine showed me
  • Reading: nothing
  • Watching: nothing
  • Playing: nothing
  • Eating: rather starve but considering eating a sandwich
  • Drinking: water
Keep your dreams safe
Close your eyes and wish for a dream which can not be true.
Wishing for the nightmares to fade from your mind and let you walk free without any thoughts or pain or anything playing games in your mind to make you not be able to stay.
Keep walking even if it is away. Keep breathing even if everything fades. Keep the dream alive in your own night mare without a place.
Keep the world in its place as time stops and that one dream is all that holds you. All that you know.
All that you know.
Unable to control.
Unable to see.
Keep your eyes closed.
Keep them safe.

Keep them innocent to the world and live with that dream.
Live for the nights where you still dream freely. Keep the night for the dreamers and the games instead of the murder in the dark.
Keep the light on.
Keep the shadows away.
Keep the place safe.
Keep on looking to the sky and away from the pain.
Keep looking away from the sins.
Keep the dreams alive.

Keep the dreams inside your mind even when the tears over flow.
Keeps the world going in your heart?
Keep this place close and safe.
Keep the tear where no one can steal them away again.
Put the lock on and do not let anyone break the dreams you held.
Keep this place.
Keep your eyes closed.
Keep them safe.

Keep them safe.
Keep them safe.
Keep your eyes closed.
Keep your dreams and never let go

Eternal damnation
A dreamer still walking through the dark without a place to even start.
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epicminion Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
this is awesome!! did you write this?
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forsakenimmortal Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
yea, write as a hobby, songs, poems, stories, i write for the fun and thank you, not many people read my poems, you are my first reader and comment thank you
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epicminion Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
No problem! That poem was awesome!! Maybe if you post them in the literature section thing you will get the amount of views you deserve!
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forsakenimmortal Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
thanks wish i knew how but i don't and i wrote another song because i was over joy from your earlier comment and thank you very much. my new one is about being broken but free.
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epicminion Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
Cool! I can't wait to read it!!!!!
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forsakenimmortal Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
then maybe i should up load now. its probably not as good because i had good feeling with the dream one but hope you still enjoy it
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epicminion Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
I love the new one!
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forsakenimmortal Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
thank you very much
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